i like you my lame little poem by me

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by dumbblonde16 (Newborn Zoner) on Wednesday, 20-Jul-2005 23:19:30

i think i like you the way you smile the way your eyes sparkle. i hope you like me back if you don't like me tell me don't leave me in the rain i like you please tell me 2 to my face that you don't like me. don't say it 2 my friends or behinde tell it 2 my face and don't lie 2 me because i like you. that was a lame poem and noone will comment and say that they liked it because im a bad writer oh well.

Post 2 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Thursday, 21-Jul-2005 6:37:57

Lame? Not really, it is true. Who would want people to tell your friends that they don'T like you instead of of telling you to your face.

Post 3 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Thursday, 21-Jul-2005 13:06:41

I can hear a rap song emerging from that...Dumbblonde it is are not crap don't put yourself down pal..and keep posting your work smile.

Post 4 by louisa (move over school!) on Saturday, 23-Jul-2005 14:51:15

there's nothing wrong with it. Your point comes across.

Post 5 by Caitlin (I've now got the silver prolific poster award! wahoo!) on Saturday, 23-Jul-2005 16:12:58

Haha nice. I like poems. I have some that are way stupider than that, and I wouldn't call yrous stupid, twas sincere.